Writing for the Web - Headlines and Teasers

Headline

  • Should be an ultra-short abstract of the article
  • Simple and straightforward (short sentence, subject-verb-object, active voice, not passive)
  • Must work out of context (search engine; article list; bookmark; e-mail newsletter)
  • Must make clear what the text is about: what will the user get for his click?
  • Should have key words that refer to news stories that are still on people’s minds
  • Should have key words that users would put in a search engine to find information about this topic
  • Must work without seeing surrounding data (e.g. pictures)
  • Must be written in plain language (no puns; no clever headlines)
  • rule of thumb: maximum of 40 – 60 character


    Teaser

    • Should be like a “slide” for the user into the article
    • The style depends on your users (serious news-style; tabloid style)
    • Make the first words count (important, carrying information; makes scanning easier)
    • Put details into the text – not the teaser
    • Maximum 300 characters

    News Teaser

    contains the basic information; short, concise, no personal opinion

    A German naval vessel helped avert another hijacking attempt by Somali pirates in the Gulf of Aden. Meanwhile, France and the US are drafting a United Nations resolution to put a stop to the piracy.

    Teaser with cliffhanger

    deliberately leaves one of the six central questions unanswered (who, what, when, where, why, how) BUT: don’t use cliffhangers too often – the idea gets boring for the user after a while.

    Three people were hurt in a car accident on Monday. But one person involved seems to have had a guardian angel.

    A new parental leave scheme has been hugely popular among fathers as well as mothers, Germany's family affairs minister said. But the success comes with a price tag.